My first go at Manga

by Tim Nickson
(London)


I have been wanting to do Manga for a while now, although I realise it's not that great I hope its at least a start.

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by: Anonymous

Well, they're in proportion, so I applaud you for that, but the positioning of the facial features. The eyes should never be more than halfway up the face. The bottom of the nose is halfway between the eyes and chin, and the mouth is between the bottom of the nose and chin. As for the artstyle, try outlining your eyes a bit more to make the lashes more prominent. Try checking out lots of manga artstyles from famous mangaka and take what you want from them, and mash it up into one. Keep practicing, and you'll be able to make a manga in 2-3 years! I hope this helped. Just some constructive criticism.

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