Im a writer

by Billy Marshall
(U.S Longview,Wa)

I think this a great exercise to learn to draw in order for the right side of the brain to work more. Great idea i have a few poems i have written please help me publish with your idea ill be able to write more and be able to be more passionate

Stumbling,Stumbling
as i fall.
I try to stand up,
but i seem to just fall.
Finally standing up.
Walking unsteadily away,
I reach cardboard alley
just like yesterday.
As i fall asleep i think about
tomorrow.
I hope i will die,
and have no more
sorrow.

Author, Billy w Marshall II
if possible can you help its my favorite poem and it means alot i have hade two heart attacks and been sick since nine and younger im only 35 yrs old i need a brake please

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Im a writer

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cardboard alley
by: Billy marshall

It is my poem, I have more that i believe are some great ones my email add. is babybird244@yahoo.com
Billy Marshall
hi
by: grace

I WUV THE POEM :)
Beautiful!!!!!
by: ivan

Hi Billy,

thank you for this unusual submission. I love your poem!!! I can sense a lot of sadness in it. I am very sorry for what you have been through, your pain probably helped you to create this beautiful piece.

I want to help you to publish your work so I would suggest you to go to: www.poemsource.com and contact them. You may find more common ground with them since they are specializing for poems only.

You did not mentioned your email address so I had to use this public space to give you an answer.

I hope it helped. Wish you all the best!

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